[Theme] Fruit v.3 ! (New version 31/03)

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Version 3!

This version has those new features.

- Better and fixed LandTex.png
- New WaterBlue.png, Splash.png, Droplet.png
- Added Clouds.png
- Added some shadow to Girder.png
- Added music
- Added more details to the Chunck.png

Screenshots:

Download:

http://www.mediafire.com/?ieibaklf4jo9597

available in the DLC.

*This Theme it's in work, so any kind of suggestion will help

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VERSION 2:

Screenshots:

http://imgur.com/a/0KsBs#0

Dowload:

http://www.mediafire.com/?kezs7a9a87fbvsc

or in the Downloadable Content.

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*Screenshots Version 1.

*Download:

You can download Fruit from the "Downloadable Content" in the principal fronted in the game.

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Version 0.9!

Tell me your opinion. Randy

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Nice theme.

it feels a little "dead" and "empty" for me (red-orange with blue greyish background). I would like to see more colors and change music from "oriental".
Aside from that, then it's good!

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Vatten allegedly wrote:
Nice theme.

it feels a little "dead" and "empty" for me (red-orange with blue greyish background).

Thanks you, and about the colours, maybe the dark red make it's "dead" so I'll change the Land's colour.

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I would like to see more colors and change music from "oriental".
Aside from that, then it's good!

Oh yes, the music Big Grin Maybe I can find someone to make it. But for now it's ok oriental.ogg . Thanks you for the suggestion.

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Nice Big Grin

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Ask Armagon for the music.I think he will help Smile

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Nice :D

Thx Wink Smiley

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Ask Armagon for the music.I think he will help

Are you sure he can help me? And he still arround here?

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Suggestion About the Land.

Colours? Shapes?

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the girder is kinda uncreative (maybe you should use a grape vine)
also make the fruits in the land bigger make more of them that are more colourful (blueberry,starfruit,pair...)
and put them on angles
i hope that helps

P.S is this a theme about botanic fruit or culinary fruit?
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What passstab said! I kinda want it to be more colorful, more fuits also. Still, good work Smile

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ok i understand your problem is that the land can't look the same as compost
edit: you could use assorted berries maybe?

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New Version!

*New Land, Border and new Girder. (passtab idea)
*Now it has Dlopet.png
*Orange has Black border.

Dowload: http://www.mediafire.com/?6ohkluy7aammak8 (It has the old Icon.png but it's the new version)

Land:

Girder:

Feel free to make any suggestion Randy

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Hey Randy,

I like your theme in general, but let's go into details.
I really like the look of the land objects, but there are also things I don't like about your theme - this includes falling cherries/bananas in the background, which I find a bit irritant. The negative feeling is emphasized by the fact that the cherries periodically swap with bananas, I would rather they remained static.
There's also one issue regarding the sky - there's a kind of a seam on it at the edge of two merged images, see for yourself:

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pretty sure the fruits swapping is just a bug in his flake animation period (needs to be a lot longer)

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maybe you should use cornucopia as clouds
the vines aren't so convincing (maybe they should be brown?)
also the fruits should still be bigger and more diverce
what i pictured with the grapevine girder is individual grapes on the top and bottum
(something like the chrismas girder)
but now i notised how unrealistic that is
maybe you should add leaves?

i only looked at the screen shots
i'm going to bed now cause typeing at -1 wpm isn't worth it :P(i hope my comment is ledgeable and not rude)

good luck!

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rhino allegedly wrote:
- this includes falling cherries/bananas in the background, which I find a bit irritant. The negative feeling is emphasized by the fact that the cherries periodically swap with bananas, I would rather they remained static.


Like nemo's said it's a bug in my flake animation. I'll fix it. Thanks to see that Wink Smiley

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There's also one issue regarding the sky - there's a kind of a seam on it at the edge of two merged images, see for yourself:

Oh right. I din't look that. I'll fix it. Thanks again.

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nice! the graphic needs some improvent regarding the shading and cartoon-ish style. keep on going!

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passtab allegedly wrote:
-maybe you should use cornucopia as clouds
the vines aren't so convincing (maybe they should be brown?)

-I'm not sure if a cournucopia will be similar as a cloud. But good idea.

-Maybe, but they aren't brown.

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-also the fruits should still be bigger and more diverce
-maybe you should add leaves?

- Not more bigger, but I'm thiking to add a pineapple or a melon.
- Yeah, good idea. Wink Smiley

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(i hope my comment is ledgeable and not rude)

Hehe, thanks for those suggestions.

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some are green and some are brown
http://img.ehowcdn.com/article-modal/ehow/images/a06/9l/12/prune-grapevines-s_-california-800x800.jpg
i think brown would look better

most fruits grow on trees so maybe you want to add some somewhere (i'd get rid of the islands in the backround and replace them with more fruit)

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i can't find a good image sharing servece :P
but damaged turrain looks bad

there is a seem in the land text
both on the top and bottum and sides

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Nice! I would add more variety to the fruit falling in the background, and maybe make the mud ball an orange (also, where are the apples?)

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Izack1535 allegedly wrote:
Nice! the graphic needs some improvent regarding the shading and cartoon-ish style. keep on going!

Thanks Wink Smiley
And yes, I whould add more shadow at the object.

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Nice! I would add more variety to the fruit falling in the background, and maybe make the mud ball an orange (also, where are the apples?)

Thanks you.
Yes, I'll think on add more fruits in the background. The Mudball in orange it's a great idea! And I hate the apple :P

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New version!

New Land, new LandBack, new girder, new icons, NEW CHUNK, orange mudball, sky and flakes animation problems fixed.

Screenshoots:

Lands:

Girder and Mudball:

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Awesome, so much improvement. That watermelon backland is great, but the girder... i dunno. Good work Big Grin.

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three problems documented here https://imgur.com/a/863h9#0
1. landtext has a border on top (just like a certain someone predicted :P)
2. landtextback has the same issue
3. there are transparent lines in the landtextback (is there alpha in it?)

suggestions
1. make the background a kitchen
2. make the watermelon seeds black
3. make the things that fall when land is damaged watermelon rinds
4. (edit) also i wouldn't use the same fruit for different things
thasall for now
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The work on this theme start again.

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New horizont:

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Hey, you're on dlc!

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Version 2. it's out.

-New girder
-New land
-New banana and new watermelon
-New sky and horizont

Enjoy it.

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Nice! I like the new watermelon, but I liked the older land texture better.

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Nice! I like the new watermelon, but I liked the older land texture better

Thanks! Yep the new watermelon it's better. And I liked the old land too, but with the old one this happened http://imgur.com/a/863h9#3.

For version 3: I will setup the flake, I'll make a new land and I'll re-make the splash.

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Hey Randy, FWIW, I increased the flake time in the DLC zip so it won't do that weird changing fruits thing Smile

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Nice theme you have here. It reminds me of Worms Armageddon. I have only just become more interested in Hedgewars again and it is good to see a nice fruit theme. And it's a lot nicer than the fruit theme i tried making a couple of years ago. I did do a little editing on it recently but most of it was free hand so it aint the best quality. The bananas and background haven't been remade yet.

Oh and a comment on your theme, the LandTex doesn't tile well. As in the stems or whatever those lines are meant to be do not line up. Hope this helps Smile

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very nice!!!

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I like your theme, too. It looks very polished now.

Please consider uploading your theme on http://hh.unit22.org/, too. It is a website operated by bender (I think) which is especially for hosting themes and maps. I have had bad experiences with one-click hosters like MediaFire, they delete often and seemingly at random. It must be luck your version 2 theme is still online. Also it can't hurt to have another backup of the theme on the Internet, just in case.

However, you should read the FAQ first, as the maintainer(s) are a bit picky. Wink Smiley

Oh, and please upload both versions, because both versions have their own charme.

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Wuzzy allegedly wrote:

I like your theme, too. It looks very polished now.

Please consider uploading your theme on http://hh.unit22.org/, too. It is a website operated by bender (I think) which is especially for hosting themes and maps. I have had bad experiences with one-click hosters like MediaFire, they delete often and seemingly at random. It must be luck your version 2 theme is still online. Also it can't hurt to have another backup of the theme on the Internet, just in case.

However, you should read the FAQ first, as the maintainer(s) are a bit picky. Wink Smiley

Oh, and please upload both versions, because both versions have their own charme.


Randi's theme is on the main DLC page under Themes.

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Randi's theme is on the main DLC page under Themes.

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Upcoming new version (version 3). Better and fixed LandTex, better water.png definition and new clouds!

Land:

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This theme looks quite promising Randy, keep it up!

Edit:
I'm not crazy about the flying cherries in the background tho. They don't look very "light".

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Version 3.0 Out!

Check the main post and tell me your oppinion! Smile

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I only see v2 in DLC.
Looks good though.

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Inu allegedly wrote:
This theme looks quite promising Randy, keep it up!

Edit:
I'm not crazy about the flying cherries in the background tho. They don't look very "light".

Thanks and I will. And about the flake, if you have something in mind tell me!

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I only see v2 in DLC.
Looks good though.

Yeah, right. I forgot to give a link to some dev to add it. I'll add a mediafire link on Thusday.

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Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/?ieibaklf4jo9597

Enjoy it and share it! Smile

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New orange with more shadows and outline (more "hedgewars's grapich style").

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This one is cool actually

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